Would we like to have "Workshop" forums for art and writing on Haven?
Submitted by Ineesa on February 3, 2009 - 10:09am
Yes. They would help people who are looking for advice to improve and give a place to share tips and tutorials.
83% (34 votes)
No. They are unnecessary and uneeded here; we have the critique welcomed tag after all.
7% (3 votes)
Maybe, but only if there were approached in a certain way... (Please post your thoughts!)
10% (4 votes)
Total votes: 41


So, what do folks
So, what do folks think? Forums where you could share tips and techniques about writing and art, or no? Is the Critique Welcomed tag enough? Would an open suggestion/advice/critique forum breed bad feelings between users? Would it be "Post at your own risk"? Thoughts? Ideas? Cookies? Donuts?
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I, for one, would very much
I, for one, would very much like the chance to have my work critiqued. I know I have a lot of room to grow, and that I can be very redundant. If anyone ever has suggestions for me, I welcome them. I don't think there's a single post of mine that isn't marked Critique Welcomed. :3
I'd love to see a
I'd love to see a 'workshop' thread for tips, tutorials and links for sure. Art and writing both.
Critiquing someone's actual work I think is well covered by the 'critique welcome' tag in general, although if someone chose to deliberately submit a particular piece for a 'group therapy' critique or something, that might be interesting too.
That might work well for Taduriel, for example, (hi Tal) since he seems keen to improve as a writer and sounds like he'd go for being put under the microscope! On the whole, though, the Haven has such a variety of people who write that it would definitely have to be a specifically-submitted thing. Many people (myself included!) write or draw more to fill out our characters' activities and have no interest/ability/ambition at/to being actual *writers* or *artists*.......but for those seeking serious improvement and with ambition in an area of art or writing, a group-critique thing might work very well.
It also depends a little on who would be doing the critique. Everyone piling in might not be a good idea. Again using myself as the example, I never critique really because I do not believe I have the foundation from which to do so - Grammar is married to Grampa as far as I am concerned. I thought a conjunction was an eye disease. Thus whoever submitted themselves to the process might have to be willing to filter the results a little :)
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Something I was thinking
Something I was thinking about was designating "workshop" forums for two purposes: One, to link to or explain tips, tricks and techniques, and two, to post *in-progress* works of writing or art. By posting a work in-progress it truly shows you are open to the development and revision that the real critiquing process requires - not just a few pointers after the fact by using the Critique Welcomed tag on a finished blog. So the "workshop" forums would be a combination of in-progress "projects" posted by people who truly want others to help them mold and revise their works, and then also various tips and techniques and how-to posts.
This would make it less of a free-for-all, I think, as it would narrow down the postings to those who are dedicated to learning and growing through the process. Those who simply want feedback on a piece could continue to use the Critique Welcome tags, whereas the workshops would be much more, um.... specialized and concentrated "learning centers."
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((The 'critique welcomed'
((The 'critique welcomed' tag does nothing. I, for one, love getting and giving comments, sharing thoughts and ideas about my and other peoples' writings, and I've noticed that even when I have written something I'm not so sure about, and would *really* like feedback (positive or negative) I will hit that tag, and.....! Nothing! So, I think this workshop idea would really drive the point home. XD "Comment, darn you all!" it would say. And it would be delicious. o_o))
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(( Uh, actually it does
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Uh, actually it does work. If people like me are paying attention. However, strangely enough life happens. So, use the tag if you want a critique and perhaps use this new forum. It worked for Tau'ariel today. It can work for you too.
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((Just because I'm a high
((Just because I'm a high elf, you get my name wrong. T_T Racist! RACIST!))
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Sorry, was in a hurry on the way to Aikido and didn't have time to look it up. So I winged it.
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We already have an art
We already have an art workshop group that doesnt get much use/postings. Before I vote in the poll, can you explain what you had in mind and if it would be any different? My biggest thought right now is that if it was the same as the other (just a group we can post to), it might not get much action. :(
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Not a group, but a
Not a group, but a forum. Personally, aside from some site mechanics, I find groups to be pretty useless. What I had in mind was a dedicated forum - one for art, one for writing. Say you have a blog that you've started, or outlined, but you're not sure where it's going or what it needs, or you want it seriously proofread. So you take it as an "in-progress" blog and post it to the writing forum. You don't post it as a blog. Instead, you make a forum post saying, for example,
"Okay, here's this blog I'm working on. I think I need to flesh out the third paragraph, but I'm having trouble thinking about the contents of a pirate ship's hold. Also, do my metaphors make sense? If you see any spelling or grammar errors, please point them out."
Then you post the blog after.
People read it over and give you the pointers you asked for, as well as, I assume, any other ideas they have.
You respond by making changes and putting up a revision.
They give more pointers.
Etc. until it's "done".
So you have a whole forum thread about your blog in-progress, from your basic beginnings to the finished product, which you then post officially as a blog.
That's the way I'd see it used, at least.
And people could also post how-to's, tricks, tips, links, etc.
It's something that I wouldn't mind putting into the works here as long as a) it would be used correctly, and b.) people wouldn't take it as an opportunity to argue grammar and sentence structure amongst themselves.
Likewise with the artz.
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I agree that the groups
I agree that the groups feature isn't as navigatable/findable as if there were specific forums. I also think that creative workshops are an excellent growth tool for people seeking to grow as artists and writers.
Growth, however, is a painful process (*punches Heulwen in the arm and screams "CHARLIE HORSE!"*). My second concern, before voting in the poll, is that in my experience both Realmportal and Haven have not had the group mentality to handle true critique. There have been an uncountable number of dramallama alarms sounded over, what I consider to be, mild critique. I sort of discount my own opinion on this issue, however, as I've been through art school - where critique is an exercise not unlike wrapping yourself and your work in a bacon suit and hurling yourself into the maw of a Tyrannasarus. So... my level of tolerance is abnormally high and thus my opinion is skewed out of the margins, I suspect.
But something that stuck out to me in your comment was this: "b.) people wouldn't take it as an opportunity to argue grammar and sentence structure amongst themselves." I would think that the entire POINT of a good workshop is to get a passionate dialogue going, and that is definitely going to include warring opinions in a debate atmosphere. Debate is not a dirty, four letter word. It CAN be done in a mature, healthy way. I've seen and taken part in plenty of critiques where people were tearing each others work apart and really hammering at the core of what the artist/actor/writer was trying to say - and then happily went out after class for coffee together and "left it in the classroom" so to speak.
I have yet to see this sort of interaction be carried out successfully online. I don't know if its the lack of context or being able to hear each others voices and see each others faces or what. Perhaps good critque and debate needs to be rooted in a human connection? I don't know. I'd like to hope that it CAN be done online, but I'd have concerns. It sounds like you do too.
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Because of the overall
Because of the overall nature of Haven being one of supportive encouragement, yes, there has been a "stern eye" pointed towards critical posts on general blogs. There always will be. I was at another, unrelated community site the other day too, where they had a "Critique" forum and then a "Display" forum - the display forum had numerous warnings against negative commentary, and pointed towards the critique forum for that. I actually think providing the two alternatives here at Haven - beyond the "Critique Welcome" tag - would help the entire situation.
When I say, "b.) people wouldn't take it as an opportunity to argue grammar and sentence structure amongst themselves." my concern is Bob posting a thread where he wants some help with his transitions. Mary and Gene each give their own opposing viewpoints. Bob says thanks and tries to work in their suggestions, but possibly choses Mary's advice over Gene's. Gene defends his point of view, saying Mary's sucks. Mary says Gene sucks. Arguing on the Internet begins, which is the Biggest Waste of Time this century.
There's no problem with people stating their opinions/advice and backing them up with their knowlege/resources/experience. That IS debate and is healthy and productive. When it begins to smack of, "Well, I'm better than you." is where I have concern.
I would like to think the majority of people here want to help each other out, and both those willing to submit pieces to critique AND those who offer critique would both be willing to offer pure knowledge and insight and put their egos on the back burner. In a classroom enviroment, this is nurtured by the presiding instructor, who stands as an authority over the students. On a website like Haven, however, we have no "authoratative presence" who can call who *is* right and who *is* wrong. It just makes it all a little more Wild West, and we have to moderate ourselves and be conscious of what we're saying and why we're saying it.
Because at some point, Bob might speak up and say, "Gee, you guys, did you even *read* my blog, or are you just baiting and attacking each other with clever sentence diagrams?"
This is, of course, a worst case scenario.
"Critique Welcome" blogs are moderated a whole lot less than untagged blogs, and a workshop forum would be moderated even less. I guess it gets down to, if given the opportunity to debate, would people still be civil or simply use it as a venue for one-upmanship?
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I'm feeling optomistic
I'm feeling optomistic today. Lets hope so! I'll vote yes.
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I only remembered hearing
I only remembered hearing about that group once you posted this comment, Iloam. So maybe a forum instead would be easier for new Haven readers and for those "Hm, wasn't there an art support section.......?" musings to find?
Maybe it's just me and not fully understanding how groups work. But I think something more consistently obvious (like a forum section maybe?) might be an idea. Could the group postings be turned into a forum subset? Or is it a group where you have to join to be able to read/post?
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I hate
I hate groups.
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As the person who started that art group, I can say yes, groups do suck. That said, I like the idea of WIP and Workshop forums, but I did hear one thing as I was reading through these comments that I would say deserves clairification.
Critique has one purpose and one purpose only, to help an artist (writers, painters, etc.) accomplish their artistic goals. That may be to write a more appealing story, or achieve a lusterous skin tone, a beautiful composition, or a chordal harmony. It is however most assuredly not a place for discussion of philosophy and debate. Critique is not criticism. Whether you like a piece of art is immaterial in critique. What you think it means is only material to the point of whether the artist's intent has been communicated. All that matters in critique is how the execution of the art serves the artist's intentions. Whether you agree with those intentions is not the point. When you're offering feedback it is VERY important to keep this in mind. It is a concrete exchange of information that an artist can use to change their work. Critique is NOT a platform for the persons to espouse their opinions and theories. Concrete examples and suggestions that give the artist ways to improve the piece, and blunt feedback of how a piece reads to you, these are what the artist needs to better target their work. Critique is to help people learn how to do things better. It is not combat, debate or a struggle of wills. It is about cooperation, not conflict.
Also, a person asking for a critique needs to be honest with themselves about what they are asking for. More than honest, they need to be proactive and make clear what they want help with. Ask specific questions like, "Is this part working?" or ,"How might I better do..." Don't just throw your work down and say fix it to the community. You need to be as involved in this, asking questions and taking note of the feedback you get. Do you have to do everything everyone says? Absolutely not. Sometimes feedback will not take you to a place you care to go. Sometimes you will disagree with it. DO NOT ARGUE WITH IT HOWEVER. You asked for help, they gave it. Be respectful and don't argue that their impression is wrong. It's their impression, not yours. Learn from it, and if you get enough feedback pointing to the same thing, examine your own perceptions of your work. Perhaps it needs a shift. As a person taking critique you need to be very very open to change. It doesn't matter how much you love any one part of your piece, if you have a whole class of folks saying it just doesn't work and showing you why and how you can fix it... FIX IT. Don't throw their words and back in their face and call your self and artiste. You're not. Artists of all sorts create for their own enjoyment and need, but they give their art to an audience. That's part of the gig. By taking critique, you're opening yourself to an audience of peers, fellow artists. Respect them, take their advice gratefully, use it to better your vision.
*gets off her soapbox*
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I would like more people to
I would like more people to comment on my work, check them out, give me some pointers and such as that is why I post my artwork because im open to comments and advice, but so far I hadnt had many people come up and say what they thought of my work, what can I improve... which is kind of disencouraging for me (but thats my opinion)
I know my grammar isnt that good or my art work, but I do try to improve, and I would like to encourage more opportunites for people to work together, support, give critques and so forth, instead of ... more like cliques where one person post something, and everyone of that clique comments especially if its completely in a positive light like for example, " Oh I think your work's the best out of everyone's" as I feel that disencourages people from outside that person's group from commenting or feeling good about their own work IYKWIM.
I want more people to come across , break the mold (or is it mould? will correct self later) so to speak and go oh yeah I like this or hey, just an idea, how about tweaking this and that, not social groups that you revolve in gush about it because that kind of fails to meet the purpose because you want critque, but get something like that. As I said before, my opinions though, and I know I'm not popular *smirks slightly*.
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I'm glad to see so many
I'm glad to see so many positive responses to the workshop idea. I'll see what we can do about getting them up over the weekend. =)
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